@TastyWords16 hmmm I don't feel like I'm in a position to actually give advice www
But I would suggest doing thorough research about the youkai you want to write about since they all have a myth about them, since you are writing about a kitsune I also suggest you look into the movements of a fox. You know, like how a cat reacts to certain things? Ear movement and the likes. It helps with depicting them in a more detailed fashion u v u