alphadeadlyxx

holy crap! 10,000 reads! new chapter soon for celebration? i think yes!

jayykin

So for your Can You Hear Me story I suggest that you short of skip them eating tacos (no one wants to hear "the taco tasted like a taco") and go to the next day or something. And In the next day or something have Ben ask Sophia on a date and start to get them close (basing it on you picture you chose for the cover PS I personally love the cover). Then soon some how incorporate their pack getting notified that they were going to get attacked by the same pack that attacked Sophia's old pack. And I think you can take that into consideration as you continue to write you storie. I personally love ot witch is a complement because I am a major book worm and it's hard to get my attention sence I am really picky and don't believe in mythical creatures. (NOT COUNTING MERMAIDS.  I TELL YOU MERMAIDS ARE OUT THEIR...somewhere) I admire you and your very skilled at writing stories. I hope you take this into consideration and I would be honored if you do. PS personally I would be honored if you just read this.

thebooknerd22

@cliffo1995  okay for 'can you hear me' what if he asks her out she says yes but a past girlfriend or boyfriend comes back if it's boyfriend he starts he being possessive and wants her back and if it's a girlfriend she starts spreading rumors about them. Well that's all i got. Hope it helped, peace✌️✌️Please update as soon as you can 
          
          Thebooknerd22. Out.