BruinsGal93

You are too sweet! Thank you so much for your comment and don't worry I love long comments! LOL! But to answer your question I think that it is alright to add on 'crap' to the characters because that is what I think makes a story more interesting, and throwing in those curve balls is what makes a reader wanting to know more. But you don't want to go overboard like some people do because they get too focused on the 'crap' instead of the characters themselves. Sorry for my rambling XD. Thank you again for such a great comment. I really can't wait to see more of your story unfold :)

BruinsGal93

Oh you're sooo welcome! And it is the least I can do for you since you always comment on my stories. I mean I absolutely enjoy reading what doesn't kill you makes you stronger. I love that you incorporate the different POVS of your characters in different chapters (I think that is purely genius, I'm jealous I never thought of that XD) and most importantly I'm in love with the plot in which you've created. It is so unique that  I have no idea how you came up with it. And it is a story that I need to read to find out more to (which is why I get so excited to see your updates :D). In a short note, you are brilliant writer and I'm looking forward to reading this story  and any other future stories you will come up with. And don't worry because you will be seeing plenty more comments from me ;D