gurlfang

hello! COuld you please give my story a shot and give some insights to it. I'll deeply appreciate it :)
          
          I'll read your story as well and give some comments and suggestions! I can see you're still new in WATTPAD. welcome! and write write write! :)
          
          here's the link of my story. TAGLISH siya hehehe! entitled MY GAY BOYFRIEND.
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/6754134-my-gay-boyfriend-on-going-series