@alyssargonzales thanks for reading! I'm excited to share the rest of it, especially the ending :)
I liked your poetry / prose piece! Some really interesting lines and unique ways of approaching and describing the subject. Plucked on my heart strings some. Keep up the good writing.
As for being noticed, of course we all started from scratch at one point. Probably these things: quality writing (or trendy ... which i kind of frown upon), genuine friendliness and humility to go out find stuff and read, praise, interact with other people without directly expecting or asking anything in return, and be active in the forums, partake in discussions, just make lots of friends firstly. The more interaction and time you invest in others, you'll also receive attention, usually. You can promote works on the sharing thread in the appropriate category/genre forum. With really good writing Wattpad staff might notice and want to feature the work which did boost my views and readers a lot!
Good luck. I'll keep an eye out for your future writing