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no problem thanks for the great advice tho, it really helps!

@sarahb4 its no problem at all so far ive been reading it sorry it took so long. what ive notice is you like to go every where i would stick to one thing like for example when it comes to how the girl and the king likes each other now you should have explained how that happen. your book so far though that i have read is really good. sorry again for taking so long