Hi guys! I'm sort-of new to writing actual stories, so, constructive criticism is always welcome!
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alyzalyly
Nov 17, 2018 12:03PM
Hiii!! If you have any suggestions regarding my work, please comment before I write the next part. HueehueheView all Conversations
Story by alyzalyly
what if?
One second I understand everything, but another second, everything is gibberish. I hope you'd understand...