am3lia

@4everandalwaysme i found it amusing! :)

FictionFree

@am3lia I wasn't meant to read it? But...you kinda DID say it earlier...you know...the whole b**** comment...I still feel terrible about how I acted, so I have to say this again. I AM SOOO SORRY! I just don't understand why you would say it without wanting me to find out.

PlayingWithFire

Thank-you so much, that actually means a lot I will try to make chapters longer I'm more hyped about the story now Edwards comming back, I'm so glad Ive been sticking to the characters tell me I I do stray to at offf how there meant to be I have put a lot of work into reading other fan fictions and re reading the books so yeah thanks thank-ou cheers yay x

am3lia

@PlayingWithFire Your book is actually the first twilight book that i like on wattpad! Most of the books either end exactly the same or are so completely different that it doesn't make sense!! I think yours is basically perfect! You have managed to keep Bella and Jacob...mainly everyone's personality the same as Stefanie Mayer described them! It would be really cool if you could make the chapters longer??? But yh its going good :)