amarsoel51

Please vote on my work! I may start back up on some of my old stories if I can get enough votes! Thanks!

amarsoel51

Soooooooooo I may have started a new book and I think that this one will go well... I fell off of writing for a bit. If you think the prologue is good, PLEASE let me know in the comments and tell me if I should continue it!!!!!!!

jerohae

@amarsoel51 of course. 
            
            Everyone is different. Some writers and readers like long paragraphs. Others don’t. Personally, as a reader (and writer) I don’t like long paragraphs. 
            
            It makes the story hard to read. Especially if it’s a little boring or hard to follow. Of course though, if that’s your style, keep with it. No harm no foul, ya know? 
            
            I actually have no other feedback. I forgot what it was that I had been thinking of. 
            
            Happy writing. I hope your days are filled with inspiration and motivation .
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amarsoel51

I love to hear feedback! I do personally try to keep it in a professional book format, so whatever feedback you have as a reader, definitely let me know!
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jerohae

Hello, I know you’re not specifically looking for feedback. At least u didn’t say. But I recommend splitting your paragraphs. 
            
            Use best judgement when doing so. But smaller paragraphs are easier to read and add a little length to your pages. 
            
            I have more feedback, if you wish to hear it. But I will not provide it unprompted seeing as though you weren’t requesting it from the get-go. But I’d be happy to provide if you wish to know.
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