I'm sharing the first draft of a childrens book I hope to publish some day. Obviously you guys arent my target audience of like 7-12 but its useful to have some objective readers. Please leave constructive feedback!
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Story by Fran King
The Thrilling Adventures of Bluebe...
Bluebell Penelope Jones HATES her name. She thinks Bluebell is a name for a gentle girl with long hair, who n...