@LoveLiveLifeLucy babe, your story is amazing and full of drama from what I have read so far. But maybe make the chapters longer. I know it's only an intro but, long intros give you more to expect, making people want to read it. Also explain what Zayn did to you in the next ch. but keep writing your a good writer and the concept of your story is perfect. YOU JUST EARNED A NEW FAN. love you babe <3 xxxxxxx