@amazingspiderfan110
Hi! I wish that you're fine.
May I ask you a service.
That's a while I didn't write, and I wanna have some opinions for this part. Just to know if it is boring or if it got some weird things.
THANKS beforehand^^
https://www.wattpad.com/1417323966-the-lion-guard-the-fiery-burnous-book-i-chapter-3
hi I'm a huge fan of your work. this is my first time writing this. so I'm not used to this. I'm a new writer and I just published a story so I was wondering if you could read it. the reason is that I'm hoping a frequent writer could help me review it.
Kamen Rider Gavv is a show where I dislike half the music tracks as well as the main suit and gimmick.
And yet is being carried by it's interesting plot and characters OMG this is such an improvment over last years season.
Ok here's a random idea for what they could do with the whole "Kion and Rani" situation if we ever get a continuation of TLG in the future.
So a common complaint regarding it is that people think (or other people told them to think) that Rani pretty much wants Kion for the Roar. And even though we know that from a production standpoint, the dialogue reffering to Kion as the Roar was pretty much there to play coy with the romance thing because the show is on Disney Jr, still didn't help. So what if they flip that concept on it's head?
Make it so that as far as both were concerned, Kion being King was purley a diplomatic thing, and that Rani only asked for the Roar to stay at the Tree of Life because (like most teenagers) she wanted to mask her true feelings for him. It re-contextualizes the aforementioned instances of Kion being reffered to as "the Roar" as her just pretty much being in denial and whatnot. Hell they could take it one step further and have it be revealed that Rani never even wanted the Roar at all (maybe she developed a fear from it) and make it so *that* was the lie.
WTF now I'm mad that I didn't think of this when I started writting my season 4
@amazingspiderfan110 From my point of view, wanting the Roar to stay at the Tree of Life was Queen Janna's dying wish which Rani wanted to fulfill for her... but she also wanted to Kion stay because of her own true love for him... Even I can see that their romance isn't taken to the level of Simba's and Nala's in the Lion King movie (such as Nala's kiss and their "mushy stuff" as Kion liked to call it) because it's junior show. Some just fail to see that.
Thanks to a facebook post from Disney. Jr, we have official confirmation that Ahadi and Uru are Scar and Mufasa's parents in the original animated continuity
@amazingspiderfan110 Lmfao. Still, the dedication to never acknowledge Kopa makes me laugh. They'll give in... eventually.
Mufasa TLK is just.... eh. I didn't hate myself when watching it.
The pacing is honestly all over the place. Kinda messy, some scenes felt out of order on occasion.
Honestly feels like it lost it's potential to tell a new story free from TLK2 or TLG's baggage.
None of the songs stand out to me, but TBF that's just because I don't really care for musicals so this is standard for TLK content.
5/10 eh
Honestly feel like Sony should move up Kraven's release to compete with Mufasa
Battle of the souless cash-grabs lol
@amazingspiderfan110 hey have a question i saw you were having trouble with the gokaiger vs wtv mega force super sentai is i was just asking bc megaforce is one of my personal favorites (i know thats weird) do u mind if i send you some inspiration for the megaforce bits or just help write the megaforce bits just asking bc GALGS is one of my favorites from you tlg season 4 is nice to but it can wait
Read this story and review:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/377101202-lion-guard-march-of-the-demons
I red your kion X zuri book and you said you were writing a kion X tiifu but which book is it????
I was bored so I edited The Emptiness Machine over Kamen Rider Zero One's OP
Now I wanna write a Zero One adaptation lol
https://streamable.com/bnj6o3
@amazingspiderfan110 as far as megaforce i can help you with that since megaforce is honestly some of my favorite pr stuff since it was my intro to pr when i was younger so i know the characters well if you wanna see how i write first I've got a book i was supposed to write so it would give me a excuse to write it then you could read that and decide since i wanna see those two eps get finished and it would feel nice to know i helped just let me know
@amazingspiderfan110 I can see that it’s kinda easy for me to tell since I take creative writing it’s easy to see when someone is kinda over a story and it shows with part two not to be offensive at all you’re stories have given me some motivation myself
@saviorboy296 I'd most likley try to finish the Gokaiger story. My main problem is that I have to adapt Gokaiger VS Goseiger for the next 2 episodes as a team up with Megaforce. And I really don't like Megaforce so it's harder for me to figure out the character stuff when it's team that is litterally made up of people who are two dimensional characters. Lion Guard season 4 is just... I have an outline, Its just more difficult for me to write.