ambecca003

Guys!!! guys!!!! guys!!!!! come back, 

KoreyKiesuke

Im Lowkey scared - i was reading the bully book you made its good ive read a few chapters but it made me hella scared exceptionally bc im just like Y/n's story line 

KoreyKiesuke

Yeah now my sister is playfully mentally bullying me, about being single and having a crush but not asking him out then tells me to give up because he was avoiding me and stuff so I tried but she brought him up again
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ambecca003

@KoreyKiesuke i am glad you are fine now. 
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KoreyKiesuke

@KoreyKiesuke ☹️ just realized I wasn't following you 
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KoharuNeedsHelp

HONEY. I NEED MORE OF “BULLY” I WILL SELL MY SOUL FOR SOME MORE ISTG

KoharuNeedsHelp

@TouyaTodoroki116 No problem! It’s amazing!! (*'▽'*)
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ambecca003

@KoharuNeedsHelp 
            
            Thank you for reading the story (ʘᴗʘ✿)(ʘᴗʘ✿)
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KoharuNeedsHelp

@TouyaTodoroki116 OMFG IM SO EXCITED ♥︎ 
            It’s fine,!
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ambecca003

Hi 
          I made tiktok videos
          If u like short ones, @becachan77 tiktok acc
          i already post fews (two, not related to this story just my short fake imaginary romance scenarios) 
          
          I would not be able to update. I am not sure but i hope to. I read it again and there were all total cringe but Thank u all for reading my story.
          
          It is just that My Taste in Romance or Relationship just different.
          
          And Daddy Issues. 
          
          
          
          I feel relieved. 
          

Pogers_rogers

this message may be offensive
Maybe I'm just being a prick cause I keep reading Tokyo Revengers x reader but the reader isn't undefined, unlabeled, non-binary, genderneutral, agender, or male readers but JUST and ALWAYS female  (the genders doesn't matter to me but what is up with authors making readers females??? Like not all of us have genders nor are defined as females since its literally US. THE Y/N. VIEWERS/AUDIENCE, its not only me but there are also people on Tumbler saying those stuff. Make some creative shit man pls)

_hachira_

@Pogers_rogers // hey, no problem! Constructive criticism is always open, this that's me speaking, I don't know about the original author.
            
            I'm glad I atleast enlightened you! 
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Pogers_rogers

@HONEY_BACHIRA I have to admit when I wrote the comment I didn't have any second thoughts and kinda forgot 'bout it, but when you replied I read my comment again and realized it was passive aggressive and inconsiderate of me for not thinking throughly. Thanks for opening my eyes and yk giving me the benefit of the doubt, and I can be hypocritical or mean unintentionally (can't say I can agree to your statement on some other Author's but we can agree to disagree), still have a lot to learn on giving constructive criticism and your comment will b3 on the back of my head whenever I read female readers, I actually enjoy some female fanfics. With a decent and/or great character and not one dimensional. Thanks again mate! <333
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_hachira_

@Pogers_rogers // just stopping by, the main reason why we authors wrote Y/n as a female is mostly because it's hard to portray a character that is generalized, if we write the character in a specific gender, it may or may not offend others who reads (that's why OC are made to avoid such things).
            
            And also, the reason why mostly you see Y/n as a female is because of the anatomy (specially when you're trying to write explicit contents), luckily for you guys, some author just label Y/n as Afab and use neutral pronouns (but their body is still that of a female a.k.a AFAB)
            
            
            Again, just a useless information you can ignore. But I symphatize with the author because it's hard to write a story with a generalized character. 
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Pogers_rogers

After re-reading the chapters, I was thinking. What was the point of the trauma/edgy backstory of y/n if it wouldn't be referenced or affected in the future? Or when Wakasa said "I think I'm falling for her" when idk 2 - 6 years later his like, idk, lying?? I mean i knew he wouldn't be ending up with us but, what was the point of mentioning then?? Or when Toman and Tenjuku bullied Y/N but some members aren't even preset???? Mostly Toman. (ex. Nahoya, Mikey, Mitsuya, Draken etc.) This is not criticism (maybe it is and I'm unintentionally being a hypocrite :| pls tell me if I am) simply just voicing out my... Confused and feel like we as the readers, are being misleading and bunch of plot holes bcs of the timeskips...

ambecca003

@Pogers_rogers it's okay, I am very bad at English, lack words. 
            
            Thanks a lot. Please do correct me. (ʘᴗʘ✿)(ʘᴗʘ✿)
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ambecca003

@Pogers_rogers ⊙﹏⊙ ⊙﹏⊙ there will be explaination in later chapter. I was sick and won't able to write. 
            
            Thanks a lot. I sometimes don't understand the own story . 
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Pogers_rogers

@Pogers_rogers am I allowed to give ideas and suggestions? Cause there are some chapters that confuse me, word pronunciations, sentences and pardon my English.. Cringy :(( (I'm sorry) usually I wouldn't mind the minor mispronounciations but there are ALOT of them that is bothering me. No, I'm not a perfectionist nor an English major, there are just some plot lines/sentences in some chapters that had a wasted opportunity :(((
            I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS CRITICISM AND NOT CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM 
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