ambulare

In desperate need of heavy critiques for Supernova. I'll do any type of payment you want in exchange for a detailed critique.

ScampsCute

I'll critique it for you, No payment required :) as you have already read, commented and voted my book (thanks for that by the way xx). Shall I leave a comment once read or do you want me to PM you? (^.^) xx
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ambulare

In desperate need of heavy critiques for Supernova. I'll do any type of payment you want in exchange for a detailed critique.

ScampsCute

I'll critique it for you, No payment required :) as you have already read, commented and voted my book (thanks for that by the way xx). Shall I leave a comment once read or do you want me to PM you? (^.^) xx
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wonderfall-

Hᴇʟʟᴏ, Kᴀᴍɪɴᴏ! Yᴏᴜ ʜᴀᴠᴇ ᴀ ʟᴏᴠᴇʟʏ ʙᴀᴄᴋɢʀᴏᴜɴᴅ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴘʀᴇᴛᴛʏ sᴡɪʀʟs. I ᴅᴏ ʟᴏᴠᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴄᴏʟᴏʀ ʙʟᴜᴇ. Uɴғᴏʀᴛᴜɴᴀᴛᴇʟʏ, ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴘᴀʀᴀɢʀᴀᴘʜ ʜᴀs ɴᴏᴛ ʙᴇᴇɴ ᴄʀɪᴛɪǫᴜᴇᴅ. A ɴᴏᴛᴇ ʜᴀs ʙᴇᴇɴ ʟᴇғᴛ ғᴏʀ ʏᴏᴜ. Pʟᴇᴀsᴇ ᴄʜᴇᴄᴋ Pᴏsᴛ #1060
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/forums/discussion/774503/1050/25/first-paragraphs.-how-good-is-yours-critiques.