I been reading my story Shadow Monarch From Another World and yeah, let's say I had pretty much bad grammar and still do today.
I don't know if did write well Jisoo character if she's a strong female character or Mary Sue, I hope I didn't give her a bad writing strong female lead.
I mean she's strong and powerful but also, she did have her struggles, she has emotion, and of course, I did try to write her backstory to be related to the child of a single parent, living with their relatives, dealing with financial problems, taking care of relative who is hospitalized, and dealing with the fact feeling useless by seeing your brother taking care of everything.
I don't know if I did good job.
Also, Jisoo is back in Sonic Otherworlds.