@amorifluer
This is an underrated fanfiction that exceeded my expectations! You write incredibly well and efficiently.
What I liked most was how you incorporated real-life authors and their works as OCs into the fic, staying true to the canon. All the characters are named after authors who actually existed in bsd, including Mori Ogai, whose personality we know as someone who likes the Lolita type but is also incredibly intelligent and strategically logical. You use his intelligence and manipulation as a key element in the plot.
As for his father-daughter relationship with Yaeko, there's a subtle boundary between his role as his daughter and as his woman. He doesn't overstep boundaries; he gives her whatever she asks for, but he's infatuated with her, mostly due to her ability and his overly protective nature.
I know that in the future, Yaeko might distance herself from her father due to his mafia management methods and her ability he desires, making her feel uncomfortable and unable to accept his actions. However, in their personal lives, she still respects him as the father who gave her a good new life, and she will never forget his kindness. She separates their personal lives from her father's mafia work, not letting her hatred for him fester. No matter how much she hates her father's job, she would be heartbroken if something happened to him.
I wish you all the best in writing more of this fic.(◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。
P.S. I know the manga has ended, and we're waiting for Part 2 of the bsd manga.
