amour_livre

Hello
          	 I'm  a little late with this. I would like to say that i noticed a change in your writing. Its subtle, but noticeable and i find it beautiful. In your previous chapters there was an air of stillness, though the message was passed in them of the positions of the story. 
          	However, in your last chapter there was a difference as i earlier said. 
          	
          	I'm no professional nor am i a critic
          	 I just love reading and i of course your book is beautifully, you have a good handle of your suspense. I applaud you for that.
          	
          	Regardless, i just thought it best to make it known to you of my observation in your grammar and structure. Its beautiful as i said, just wonderful. Keep up with it and may the good Lord strengthen you.
          	❤

dallas1213

Dandelionsblown30

          
          Hey Stranger ✨❤️✨
          
          
          What does love mean to you?
          
          
          
          You might be interested in the book I'm writing. It explores baring your  soul to someone in hopes that it would lead to true love.
          
          
          I'll be posting chapters every Fridays so you'll always have something to look forward to.✨
          
          
          I hope you join me on this journey.
          
          
          Warning! You might just fall in love!❤️
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/346857364?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=girkwhoreads3&wp_originator=yL5Wl39DLlQZy8gh1S5kmm2CTYttgKloQIo83fpfhFDC437oFLW1M3I1JQePAHxOj0Wh5OAh3KbDedtyp4iIVFpy3T1xkMHxPpEa391fc5XJ%2BvZydKpduHaDn5vC%2F07C
          
          

amour_livre

Hello
           I'm  a little late with this. I would like to say that i noticed a change in your writing. Its subtle, but noticeable and i find it beautiful. In your previous chapters there was an air of stillness, though the message was passed in them of the positions of the story. 
          However, in your last chapter there was a difference as i earlier said. 
          
          I'm no professional nor am i a critic
           I just love reading and i of course your book is beautifully, you have a good handle of your suspense. I applaud you for that.
          
          Regardless, i just thought it best to make it known to you of my observation in your grammar and structure. Its beautiful as i said, just wonderful. Keep up with it and may the good Lord strengthen you.
          ❤

Oracle__21

Hello, there ❤️ Thanks soo much for your lovely comments and votes, God bless. They mean a lot. I hope you enjoy it and it blesses you. Feel free to ask any questions.

amour_livre

@Oracle__21 Thanks, your story is very interesting. Although its finished, I would like to give you my review of it when I'm done reading.  God has gifted you a wonderful talent. Take care
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