Hello
I'm a little late with this. I would like to say that i noticed a change in your writing. Its subtle, but noticeable and i find it beautiful. In your previous chapters there was an air of stillness, though the message was passed in them of the positions of the story.
However, in your last chapter there was a difference as i earlier said.
I'm no professional nor am i a critic
I just love reading and i of course your book is beautifully, you have a good handle of your suspense. I applaud you for that.
Regardless, i just thought it best to make it known to you of my observation in your grammar and structure. Its beautiful as i said, just wonderful. Keep up with it and may the good Lord strengthen you.
❤