anaaa13

Quick question.
          	Do you prefer to read a book when it is written in the first or third person?

PreciousClark7

@anaaa13 I prefer to read a book I don't care about it being written in any person as long as it's well written, intriguing and keeps me seated and wanting more chapters am good to go 
          	  But if I have to choose for me I'd say First Person!
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pmarcatti

@anaaa13 for me, first, but I really don't mind if it's  third person!
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pebababa_and_jeeby

Third replaces the need for POV switching and helps maintain a constant tone/tense
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anaaa13

Quick question.
          Do you prefer to read a book when it is written in the first or third person?

PreciousClark7

@anaaa13 I prefer to read a book I don't care about it being written in any person as long as it's well written, intriguing and keeps me seated and wanting more chapters am good to go 
            But if I have to choose for me I'd say First Person!
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pmarcatti

@anaaa13 for me, first, but I really don't mind if it's  third person!
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pebababa_and_jeeby

Third replaces the need for POV switching and helps maintain a constant tone/tense
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anaaa13

Lines we cannot cross- Do you think this story could be told even better? Somehow I think I could have written it much better and deeper. Although I received many positive comments. I realize that in some places I could have deepened the plot much more, as well as the characters and their relationship.

anaaa13

@legalmethods Thanks for the wonderful words. 
            Yes, Andrea's character like many others didn't get a chance to develop in this story. And that annoys me now. 
            Overall, I am satisfied with what I wrote and how the story ended. But I don't know, I have the impression that something is missing.
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anaaa13

@hoepoettic Thanks for the wonderful words. I don't know, somehow when I re-read what I wrote, I had the impression that I had left something unfinished. Or that there was a lack of detail and depth. I think the story could have been more complex. Certainly this version will stay here forever. If I decide to deepen what has already been written, it will be in a new story with the same characters and events, just a different version.
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legalmethods

@anaaa13 I think it was perfectly written and I enjoyed every moment but I do realize that I  would have liked to see the daughter's character development in a sense. Because the book did start with her as a more central character but then I guess further down she just kinda faded away
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fati1982

Just finished ''Lines We Cannot Cross'' and I'm completely blown away. 
          The characters felt so layered and real, and the dialogue was next-level deep. Truly an amazing read-compliments to the author!
          Thank you for sharing your gift with us. I can't wait to read whatever you write next

anaaa13

@fati1982  thank you ❤️
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NatureBeeGirl17

Hey, I just wanted to send you some appreciation.
          Your writing has me in a complete chokehold, I’ve loved every single one of your stories so far. You can truly feel the emotion that you pour into your words and characters, I cannot wait to keep reading. Thank you so much for sharing your imagination and for feeding my reading addiction. I hope you always have the motivation to keep writing, I am such a fan ❤️

anaaa13

@NatureBeeGirl17 thank you. ❤️
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pmarcatti

Hi.... I just want to say that I love the way you write, it is very warm and sensible, I'm wondering if you are going to continue wrintting the shape of silence, thank you for sharing your talent with us

pmarcatti

Thanks
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anaaa13

@pmarcatti Yes, I will. The chapter is ready, I just need to finish it.
            And thank you.
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anaaa13

Hello, everyone. I can't wait to share the first chapter of my new book with you. And I can't wait to hear your thoughts. Until then, you can get acquainted with the story and the characters. I love you all.

batgrrl27

@anaaa13 - really enjoying one night stand- I live the building tension between the characters!
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MaviKova

@anaaa13 I’ll definitely start reading this once I have more time.
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yalnizbiri18

Hello, I really enjoy reading your story. I was very happy that one of the characters is a Turkish actress.

yalnizbiri18

@MaviKova mxxjjzkz türküz tabii ya
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MaviKova

@yalnizbiri18 anee Türkmüsün gel sarılalım gardaşım
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