I've decided to rewrite my DBZ fanfiction pretty much completely. since it's been more then three and half years since the first chapter and my writing skill have gotten better over the years. but don't worry I'll keep the original up and work on that the same time. It's just when I get the new rewritten version finished I'll post that up instead. I'll take a lot of constructive criticism, on what I can do better. Maybe what I need is an editor, if anybody is up for that I'm looking for one. And somebody to tell my what I'm doing wrong and how I can work on it. Thanks