anannya sharma

Hiiii can you please help me???
          
          I don't know what is going on in my wattpad app .... since last night no story is opening nor any notifications are coming 

Hey, sorry for posting it here but do try to read this story and vote comments 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/361296793?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=WhiteBird32

Hi Anannya   I saw your message and I am very grateful for the message and I would love to read your story. Wishing you luck from my side for your beautiful journey on wattpad 

 Ohk so ..I would like to review 
          2 things. 
           The intense in the story is missing.. like. In the  first chapter  u called her a warrior ..and failed to explain why she wore the lehnga he sent .. 
          Moving too fast . didn't really had there own voice entire chapter.. it was written through what they were .. it's not wrong to start that way ..but it bring out more suspense to the story when u actually hype there voice ... By  how the world sees them. .  and than comes their voice ..how they made themselves like that ..
          
          I don't know if any of this is making sense to u ..  if I managed to explain what I really felt .
           However I like your writing style ..great  for someone who just started writing .! 
          

@anannyaaq  ...chill nothing serious..just kidding !!

https://www.instagram.com/reel/DJpJPL8TOZ4/?igsh=MXMzam1kdDNobHBxbA==
          Go and check Insta for spoilers 

@anannyaaq   all though just kidding ..
          But ..baby girl ..  princess... 
          Convince me u are really a girl ..   

 Heyy 
          So  I wasn't really active with Wattpad .. which took me three days to receive your message.. I would read it and let u know  ..give me some  time 

Guysss have a look ... 21+
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/394188862