Cynical Strawberry

So...in case you haven't noticed I'm terrible at finishing stories. I write the beginning and then either get bored or have no idea how to continue it. However... I. Just. Published. My. First. Complete. Book!!! Yes, it's not my usual fantasy, but rather a collection of short romantic works based on the people around me. However, it is completed so if you like that sort of thing, please take a look!

I know I have other stories I have to update but I really wanted to try something weird and different combining real life with fantasy in a weird way.  So, Goalie Knight it is. https://www.wattpad.com/story/102700266

Thanks so much for the add!! *^^*

Thank you so much for adding my story, The Stupid Knight, to your reading list!

I really like your story plot and you have developed an interesting personality and interests for your character through your writing. But, I dislike how you have your dialogue in brackets instead of in quotes and I also feel like the story could be a little more attention grabbing and have slightly more twists and turns. The fact that she gets three out of four of the magic’s without doing anything seems a little boring. If she could gain her ability through her own efforts or have something more unexpected occur that might make it more interesting. But I haven’t read too far in yet so, we’ll see.
          
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