@anastasiainahaze
Hey there, I know this is (kind of) a late reply, but I think the first person POV works well for your story. It’s a very small cast with two main characters and many side characters. Plus, it gives us a more personal and intimate view into your characters’ heads to know their thought process, personalities, etc.
Please do let me know when you’re posting more chapters. I’d love to see Ezra and Elara’s story ends!!