andioxtheauthor

My apologies for sliding into your Conversations board uninvited. I just wanted to grab your attention to my stories.
          There is an arranged marriage romance "Billion Dollar Wedding", a High School romance "My Enemy, My Stalker", a young adult College Romance "Unravelling Aurora", and some mafia romances "Mafia and Miss Honey", "His Captive" "The Theory of Trouble" & "Becoming Her Romeo".
          Once again, I'm sorry for intruding.  
           Have a nice day ahead!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/189697759-unravelling-aurora-%E2%9C%93

Hi. I've started your book Random Love. I'm enjoying it to this point. If I may make a suggestion? I'm sure it was simply an oversight, but when talking about Silas's watch, you write that it is 14k silver. There is no such thing. Just wanted to let you know in case you can edit that part. Try to be as accurate on things such as that, even if it seems a small issue. That's what makes a writer stand out.  Looking forward to the next chapter!