andxrfels

Hello, here is a little update about Forget-me-Not:
          	
          	As you already know, I was supposed to rewrite chapters 1–4 plus 6 only. However, I have decided to extend this rewriting session to chapters 7, 9 and 10, for the prose and several other issues truly bother me.
          	
          	My wish as a writer is to write something I am proud of, not a story I would say "just wait for chapter X, it is better than the previous ones." I also wish to give you, readers, something meaningful, as perfect as possible, and that makes you want to keep turning the pages—sliding your screen.
          	
          	For the time being, chapter 6 is almost finished, hopefully I can repost it next week. I will do my best to rewrite the rest as soon as possible, so that chapter 14 doesn't appear too late.
          	
          	Here is the organisation sheet for the time being:
          	—chapter 06: 1/2 of scene 1, 1/2 of scene 3 are left to be rewritten.
          	—chapter 07: full rewriting of all scenes (the themes remain the same).
          	—chapter 08: light polishing, plus major rewriting of the last scene.
          	—chapter 09: medium polishing, rewriting of the middle section.
          	—chapter 10: medium polishing, scenes 3 & 4 to be rewritten.
          	—chapter 11: light to medium polishing.
          	
          	I promise this is the final rewriting session. Now that I've found a prose style I enjoy, it should be fine.
          	
          	Also, if anyone wishes to be a beta-reader, let me know. I think it could be useful to receive feedback when my mind is so perfectionist.
          	
          	Thank you for your understanding :)

andxrfels

Hello, here is a little update about Forget-me-Not:
          
          As you already know, I was supposed to rewrite chapters 1–4 plus 6 only. However, I have decided to extend this rewriting session to chapters 7, 9 and 10, for the prose and several other issues truly bother me.
          
          My wish as a writer is to write something I am proud of, not a story I would say "just wait for chapter X, it is better than the previous ones." I also wish to give you, readers, something meaningful, as perfect as possible, and that makes you want to keep turning the pages—sliding your screen.
          
          For the time being, chapter 6 is almost finished, hopefully I can repost it next week. I will do my best to rewrite the rest as soon as possible, so that chapter 14 doesn't appear too late.
          
          Here is the organisation sheet for the time being:
          —chapter 06: 1/2 of scene 1, 1/2 of scene 3 are left to be rewritten.
          —chapter 07: full rewriting of all scenes (the themes remain the same).
          —chapter 08: light polishing, plus major rewriting of the last scene.
          —chapter 09: medium polishing, rewriting of the middle section.
          —chapter 10: medium polishing, scenes 3 & 4 to be rewritten.
          —chapter 11: light to medium polishing.
          
          I promise this is the final rewriting session. Now that I've found a prose style I enjoy, it should be fine.
          
          Also, if anyone wishes to be a beta-reader, let me know. I think it could be useful to receive feedback when my mind is so perfectionist.
          
          Thank you for your understanding :)

andxrfels

Hello, may this new year be gentle on you 
          
          Here are little updates about Forget-me-Not:
          — Chapters 1 to 3 have been fully rewritten. They should not be touched again.
          — Chapter 4's rewriting is almost done. One scene is left to be polished/rewritten (and it should be quick).
          — Chapter 6's rewriting has not started yet, but the new outline for scenes 2 and 3 is ready. I will soon work on it.
          
          —Chapter 13 will be posted next week. I have not decided yet when exactly, but certainly on friday or saturday. It is a long chapter, a real challenge to bring to life. I hope you will like it!
          —Chapter 14's writing has started. If everything goes well, it should be ready for february. 
          
          For chapters 5, 7 to 11, they will be polished. So far, no rewriting session is planned (hopefully it won't be necessary). Maybe a few points in chapters 7 and 11 will be modified, since one major character's first appearance has been moved to chapter 2.
          
          I will see you soon, thank you for the love you bear for Forget-me-Not ❤️

andxrfels

Hello, just to let you know that I am (once again) rewriting the first chapters. Since my prose has greatly evolved, I want them to reflect it. So far chapter one has been fully rewritten and posted. I will work on the others very soon. 
          
          Also, chapter 13 is 80% written, and you should get chapter 12 later in the month.
          
          See you 

SupremeShalaylee

@andxrfels i'll have to catch up <3
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