Thank you so much for commenting and voting, I'll keep on reading yours til it ends... sorry, there's nothing really much to say with your story.. it really is superb, descriptions were great,it's like written by a professional writer.. My only suggestion is (as a fan of fantasy stories) keep up the level of excitement and action and how about a love story? Not yet necessary I guess..
For reading all through out I would like to dedicate a chapter to you in my other book, would that be okay?