andyelludura123

@AldrineFualo there's no need to really, but if you insist, then thanks you, and I am really grateful for the comments you have been giving me, it's so uplifting you know, something I have never felt in a long time with my works...C:

AldrineFualo

Thank you so much for commenting and voting, I'll keep on reading yours til it ends... sorry, there's nothing really much to say with your story.. it really is superb, descriptions were great,it's like written by a professional writer.. My only suggestion is (as a fan of fantasy stories) keep up the level of excitement and action and how about a love story? Not yet necessary I guess..
          
          For reading all through out I would like to dedicate a chapter to you in my other book, would that be okay?