Hello! I’m a random person, but I just came to tell you a few things. I read what you wrote and your writing ability is very good. You may have made some grammatical mistakes, but everyone does, especially when english isn’t your mother thounge. I make a lot of mistakes on daily basis in both my mother thounge and english and people often correct me. But that’s a part of being human. Don’t lose your confidence over a few people on the internet that corrected you. It’s really not worth it when you write well. I really hope you will see this sometimes. Goodbye!
