angeldollar05

I am working on a book about my life can wait to publish it 

My_Tainted_Love

I just got to looking at your story. You asked for pointers and so far I like it. Just make sure spelling and capitalization is good because it'll draw more people into it and will be an easier read. Also try breaking up the long paragraphs in each section with spacing every like 5 or so sentences as this will also help with reading. Hope that helped! But I do like the concept of the story itself.