angelmcclendon1

Guys writing my first short story(between10-12 pages)tell me what you think and if I should continue it and make a series.
          	
          	   will notify when is finished 
          	        
          	        WISH ME LUCK
          	
          	((P.S. I WOULD LIKE YOUR HONEST OPINION)WILL BE TAKING SUGGESTIONS  SO,IF YOU HAVE AN FEEL FREE TO CHAT WITH ME).

angelmcclendon1

Guys writing my first short story(between10-12 pages)tell me what you think and if I should continue it and make a series.
          
             will notify when is finished 
                  
                  WISH ME LUCK
          
          ((P.S. I WOULD LIKE YOUR HONEST OPINION)WILL BE TAKING SUGGESTIONS  SO,IF YOU HAVE AN FEEL FREE TO CHAT WITH ME).