I tried to proofread my two published stories and ganito yung reaction ko while reading; overjoyed—satisfied—medyo satisfied—neutral—uncomfortable—bothered—despaired. Hindi mapirmi yung POV haha. Well, understandable naman kaya it's fine.
P. S. I am apologetic because I wrote those two (UTTFO, FP) kasagsagan ng Finals to let my stress out kaya naka lean in yung story sa stressing side.