Poofballnco
Merry Christmas! Hope you're doing okay <3
angxlic_
kim_miyoung16
Hi sorry for popping on your wall like this. I'm a new writer on wattpad. Currently on with my first book. It would be great it you would check that story out and vote + comment if you like it ☺. Thank you and sorry for bothering you
https://www.wattpad.com/story/273419586?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=kim_miyoung16&wp_originator=8%2BsZaLVeT%2BMkOJHSgpzGB7O3BgPnkkmThl2Or3ab%2Fi92eFDygIVLNcGAD%2BJGOZCd5jIGvyyOm66bNxTbRpJN3MAbQa5PAIZAQxZDHpNbnp6mS8JsWdDG4XCd3J3cky6x
And sorry if you don't like to take reading requests
angxlic_
i have been sooooooooooo busy that i wasnt able to focus on my book as much as i wanted to but hopefully next week i'll start working on it again
angxlic_
@JeremyFalco thankss I know life is really busy at the moment but I'll be waiting for yours too
Poofballnco
@angxlic_ Its okay, I'm gonna wait your book, but no rush! We're all busy with college and life >:P
angxlic_
Some of the minor changes I've made to the story is Caliana's name. It had to be something unique so I was STUCKK between two names Livia and Alora and I genuinely couldn't pick one sooo I asked 3 members for my family and Alora won two of the votes.
(her last name has changed too and now it's Vonsin. So from the original Caliana Johnson to Alora Vonsin. I might change it at some point but for now it stays)
angxlic_
I mightt change Caliana's name...
angxlic_
@JeremyFalco I knoww Caliana's a nice name and I don't really want to change it but as the story progressed, having a unique name for her would be best
angxlic_
I'm thinking of changing the name of my book (which is being rewritten that's why it's unpublished) from 'the fight for the crown' to 'for the crown' but I don't really know if I should
Ahhhhh crisis
Poofballnco
@angxlic_ For The Crown feels more zappy and action-packed, while The Fight For The Crown sounds like an epic and slow-burning fantasy. Either way, both titles work! >:}
angxlic_
HELLO
soo, I know I haven't been active with my story (it's still unpublished) but I figured that it really did need many improvements because I want to look at my story at the end and be like 'that's something I would wanna read' and to reach that, I have to work hard on improving it which means it needs lots of work.
(Just to clarify, the plot, the storyline and nothing important will change so no one would have to read it all again)
angxlic_
i just unpublished 'the fight got the crown' (AGAIN i know) i just didnt want anyone who reads it to get confused or anything but it is getting HEAVILY improved at the moment
ariantxa_
@angxlic_ I totally understand!! Good luck & if u ever need some help or ideas u can always ask me! ❤️
angxlic_
@ariantxa_ nope, not completely, the storyline will remain how it is now, same goes to the characters etc. I just want to rewrite the first five chapters and improve some grammar that's all
angxlic_
My only published book is under some HEAVY editing and rewriting right now so it is going to be confusing
(I also changed my pfp)
angxlic_
every time I read my story again, I see that it needs more and more improvement so I want to completely rewrite the first 7-8 chapters but the thing is I have to unpublish it again and I don't know what to doooo
xstrahot
@angxlic_ Well good luck then, I love your book so I hope it's gonna be something good! Feel free to pm me if you need any help!
angxlic_
@valienteluchadora no I don't because when I republish it, they will come back although I might loose some reads and votes because I want to delete my first two chapters, they're really random and pointless