@angxlic_
It's been four years since I last published and wrote consistently . Now my awful book is back in my drafts and I'm starting fresh, and very, very slow. If anyone's interested in a quick read, I just published my short story and would love some feedback! Have a great day guyss ❤️❤️
Merry Christmas! Hope you're doing okay <3
Hi sorry for popping on your wall like this. I'm a new writer on wattpad. Currently on with my first book. It would be great it you would check that story out and vote + comment if you like it ☺. Thank you and sorry for bothering you
https://www.wattpad.com/story/273419586?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=kim_miyoung16&wp_originator=8%2BsZaLVeT%2BMkOJHSgpzGB7O3BgPnkkmThl2Or3ab%2Fi92eFDygIVLNcGAD%2BJGOZCd5jIGvyyOm66bNxTbRpJN3MAbQa5PAIZAQxZDHpNbnp6mS8JsWdDG4XCd3J3cky6x
And sorry if you don't like to take reading requests
i have been sooooooooooo busy that i wasnt able to focus on my book as much as i wanted to but hopefully next week i'll start working on it again
@JeremyFalco thankss I know life is really busy at the moment but I'll be waiting for yours too
@angxlic_ Its okay, I'm gonna wait your book, but no rush! We're all busy with college and life >:P
Some of the minor changes I've made to the story is Caliana's name. It had to be something unique so I was STUCKK between two names Livia and Alora and I genuinely couldn't pick one sooo I asked 3 members for my family and Alora won two of the votes.
(her last name has changed too and now it's Vonsin. So from the original Caliana Johnson to Alora Vonsin. I might change it at some point but for now it stays)
I mightt change Caliana's name...
@JeremyFalco I knoww Caliana's a nice name and I don't really want to change it but as the story progressed, having a unique name for her would be best
I'm thinking of changing the name of my book (which is being rewritten that's why it's unpublished) from 'the fight for the crown' to 'for the crown' but I don't really know if I should
Ahhhhh crisis
@angxlic_ For The Crown feels more zappy and action-packed, while The Fight For The Crown sounds like an epic and slow-burning fantasy. Either way, both titles work! >:}
HELLO
soo, I know I haven't been active with my story (it's still unpublished) but I figured that it really did need many improvements because I want to look at my story at the end and be like 'that's something I would wanna read' and to reach that, I have to work hard on improving it which means it needs lots of work.
(Just to clarify, the plot, the storyline and nothing important will change so no one would have to read it all again)
i just unpublished 'the fight got the crown' (AGAIN i know) i just didnt want anyone who reads it to get confused or anything but it is getting HEAVILY improved at the moment
@angxlic_ I totally understand!! Good luck & if u ever need some help or ideas u can always ask me! ❤️
@ariantxa_ nope, not completely, the storyline will remain how it is now, same goes to the characters etc. I just want to rewrite the first five chapters and improve some grammar that's all
My only published book is under some HEAVY editing and rewriting right now so it is going to be confusing
(I also changed my pfp)