Hey dear... I have recently read your published story "Balls Of Sunshine"... To be True, you are going awesome on it plot construction. Just one thing you should work on your putting punctuation skill...!!! I have sometimes mixed the characters, actually...!! That's why suggesting you to work on it...!!!
Your story concept is sometimes so approaching that even my emotions have gone wild...!!! I have read your whole story in one go...!!! Keep working on it & your writing skill..!! All the best...!!!