DebraTrembath

I'm reading Special Omega, good storyline but it doesn't explain things and it's timeline is extremely short. Like Josh said he's her cousin no explanation. Jumps from one thing to the next without anything connecting them. I'll keep reading though hope it gets better.

silverwolf_15_

Hey, I hope i ain't a bother, but if you'd like you can always send over your stories and I'll edit them for you. Please make sure to check my profile for details, and I'm here to help, and edit your books for you. 
          Enjoy your day/night