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Refer back to the beginning of my explanation. You need to change your summary description of your first One Piece book.
            
            Make it more mysterious, less info. Let the readers find out for themselves on what exactly happens in the story and NOT the summary. You put too much information in your description.
            
            Secondly, don't update so quickly. You get less reads then more if you update every day.
            
            Lastly, make sure your writing is professional and that it doesn't have many grammatical errors or an excess and unneeded amount of punctuation.

@Animefreak1145 but how can you do that if you don't have alot of reads.

I read the summary of it. The first thing that makes or breaks a story in this site(or even in real life with books) is the summary.
            
            You need to be careful with how much information you put in your summary, if you put too much, the reader already sees through on what's going to happen in the actual story. It's best to leave a bit of mystery in the summaries.
            
            Also, you need to be careful with how much punctuation you put in the summary too. Too much punctuation in ANYTHING is not needed, and it will make your readers think you don't know how to write or that your story will also be filled with mistakes.
            
            Lastly, I noticed that even though you have 20 chapters to your story, you don't have the views matching them. Did you perhaps update five chapters at once? Or all at once? If you did that, instead of updating once every week or two weeks or so, no wonder you don't have views or reads.
            
            You can't be too eager in updating your stories, cause then you won't get views. You have to do it slowly and go from there.
            
            What I do for each chapter, I look at the view count, and then mark a view count I want it to go up to, THEN I update. For example: In my chapter before the one I updated, it was at 120k views. I decided to wait until it is 130k views to update again. Which I did.
            
            That's how it should go, or, you can just wait a week and then update. Also, it's ALWAYS best to be at least three chapters ahead of your readers in the story just in case an unexpected Hiatus comes up. 
            
            That's all the advice I can give you so far. ^.^

@anime__dreamer I will and sorry I didn't know u replied back 

@thecoolsisters no problem :) and who you tell your followers about me :) I would like that alot