anime_sweetheart45

Hey everyone I know your all impatient for the story but please give me some time as the battle scene for this is gonna take a while.

Carnelianstar

There’s some misspell or misplace words on your new story, you might want to fix that and you could use your chatgpt for fix grammar.
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Carnelianstar

It depends if your using manga or anime for battle, how are you doing today and you might double check on grammar and sentence.
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RavenQuillen7

@anime_sweatheart45 I understand, just take your time.
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Carnelianstar

Hey sweetheart, for book 2 : you think grim hit levy with disc like in game or you’re going change things up little.

Carnelianstar

That’s too bad, I would to see some action with spelldrive and Pokémon together and chance for levy to shine.
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Carnelianstar

So you’re saying levy is going hit by disc and end up school infirmary
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TheFandomCrosser_018

I'm thinking of making a twst x pokemon book one day or soon I already have partnered Pokemon's for the most of the boys but I can't think of partners for Leona, kalim, sebek any ideas/opinions??

Carnelianstar

Sebek is total dipward who yells about everything 
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TheFandomCrosser_018

@anime_sweatheart45 hi! Thank you for the suggestions! Um I may be asking for much but do you have discord? I wanna be friends! It's fine if not I'm a complete stranger so(⁠•⁠ ⁠▽⁠ ⁠•⁠;⁠)
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anime_sweetheart45

@TheFandomCrosser_018 
            
            Sure! Here are some thoughts.
            
            Leona: You can use a Pyroar if you want to go for the classic. Absol is a good one, as it is the disaster Pokémon; Leona would understand why people ostracize it.
            
            Kalim: Popplio would be good for Kalim as the otter because it matches with his happy Persona and Magic, which makes them compatible. Then there is Buizel, who is an Otter---as Floyd likes to call him that---which is another good one to match his style. 
            
            Sebek: Well, it took me a while to find a good Pokémon for sebek and it was a bit difficult, so because he is inspired by maleficents lighting bolt, an electric Pokémon would be good, like Raichu, or Personally a Manectric. Or if you wanna go to a literal sense, you can use Krokroke or Totodile as his name is inspired by a crocodile deity
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MayliMor

How about vanilla flavor of a candy clover

MayliMor

@ MayliMor  OK i can wait and other chapter
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anime_sweetheart45

@MayliMor I already have a flavor picked out for Trey but keeping it a secret. The candy clover gonna be added though!
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TheFandomCrosser_018

I love your story! I've been lately reading twst x pokemon and I just love all the stories on it, I also like the pokemon you paired the heartslabslyul boys with too! Scorebunny is perfect for ace same with milcery! Wonder how trey will get himself to spin around so milcery evolves to alcremie and the candy topping, it should be the clover one no further questions(◍⁠•⁠ᴗ⁠•⁠◍⁠)

anime_sweetheart45

@TheFandomCrosser_018 Hey~! Im so glad you loved it! I really try to make sure the pairing for the boys not only match their personality but also their relationship! And the hint i am giving for Trey's Milcery is that that it will be a candy matched one... just a different flavor one :3
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