just a little note i hate grammar so dont be surprised if u dont see much of it i like to write my stories in either i call my perspective form when i wud  tell you which chara POV it is that wayits easier for u to imagine the Pesperctive change or script for which looks something like this : character 1 - .....
character 2 - ,,,,,,,
 keep in my these things when you read if any part of the atory seeme not normal or abstract or whatever its just part of what i thought up so not always what truly happens i prefer to usually write fanfics vut in rare cases they r original works 
haters can hate if u dont like my works instead of telling what u hate about either keep it to urself or not read it plz writing is my stress relief not a reason of stress