Amee

Hi, I just noticed you have read my story Stuff It. Can you share your thoughts on it? I would love to get an idea of what you thought about it. 

hey amee I really hope u can make a story I'm looking foward on reading I am writing one but it's sorta crappy in a way that I need to abriviate to make it bettercan You please tell me what I Should add or Fix thanks I. love you Amee

Hey guys!
          
          Right so don't get angry, but I am deleting The Fortunate One permanently, since I don't have the time to continue it yet. The reason why I'm not continuing to write this story is because I want to focus on my studies at the moment - I will probably write the story next year or whenever I get the chance. 
          
          If you made any payments (which were comments) for The Fortunate One and I haven't done a critique for you, then I'm sorry. Although, all the comments are deleted along with the story, therefore your payments are deleted too. Thank you for helping me in this short journey and I hope you the best of luck for writing your stories. 
          
          -Amee :)

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Could I please pm you my critique form??

Hey, 
          can you please the first chapters of my novel and tell me what you think about them? 
          
          In My True Element
          Summary - Air is an elemental who has to protect his family by working with his enemy and the woman who broke his heart three hundred years ago. 
          
          You can either message me or comment on the story - it's up to you. 
          
          I will provide my feedback of your story shortly. 
          
          
          Thanks in advance, 
          Ksenija
          
          the link - http://www.wattpad.com/story/19271040-in-my-true-element

hey can you please critique my book "sea?" ill read and comment on your book. Thank you :)

Title: A Place Called Home
          Summary: 
                This is a complex love story of Alice and Sam from Alice’s point of view. Alice always dreamt about having a nice cozy home. The house she gets is completely different. This is the story about how this house becomes to be the place she calls home. 
          	Alice is a kindergarten teacher, and has started her first job in a public school. She is a neglected child of a single mother. She is innocent in many ways; she has not seen the underbelly of society until she meets Sam. 
          	Sam is a shady character. On the paper, he owns and run a strip club but in reality, he is underworld boss of the area. He is the king of his domain, Lion King of his jungle.
          	There is vast gap between them, Sam is 35 and Alice is only 24. Sam is very much set in his ways; Alice is just starting her life. Sam is a caveman; Alice is a modern woman.  
          	What brings them together is Luke, Sam’s son. Luke is in Alice’s class. Alice notices that Luke is a neglected child and forms kinship with him. She confronts Sam about Luke’s neglect and this is how they meet.
          	In many ways, they follow reverse order to form a relationship. They come together for the sake of Luke.	They live together due to circumstances. They become a couple and fall in love with each other.
          
          Genre: General Fiction / Romance
          Link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/17177045-place-called-home
          
          Do you want me to message you or comment on the story?
          Either is fine with me
          
          I will read your novel as soon as possible and try to give honest opinion

Hey guys! 
          
          I've updated another chapter for The Fortunate One, so go ahead and check it out if you want. Cheers.
          
          -Amee :)

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