Hello helloo~Anyway I'm wasting your time rn by reading this so let me get into the major things I want to tell you. I would proudly like to say is that I already enjoy reading your book 'The Lonely Star' and wish to see your book become famous as each days,weeks,months,and even years go by! Even though 'Reader-San' is a little bit of a Mary Sue (which is hard for most of us writers to try to avoid this) that's okay as it shows a flaw that you can improve on later on in the future. Moreover I like the fact how each chapter isn't too long as it is also not too short,and the cover is really nice I like the font a lot too. I'm [most likely] rambling too much but to sum it up,I would rate your book at least a 4 star rating and/or higher and like I said there's still room for improvements (not like I can talk I'm a bad Author lololol) which is a good thing.
✿Asahi-Kun
(Just now looking at what I wrote I didn't know I wrote a lot :0)