HaIkYuU443

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          Hi! I would like to make a request! I suggest that you could make a Hinata Shoyo/Shouyou x reader ☺️ Im still making a Tsukkishima x reader so I also need advice :) Tysm for reading!
          
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-BAEKOFF

Hello helloo~Anyway I'm wasting your time rn by reading this so let me get into the major things I want to tell you. I would proudly like to say is that I already enjoy reading your book 'The Lonely Star' and wish to see your book become famous as each days,weeks,months,and even years go by! Even though 'Reader-San' is a little bit of a Mary Sue (which is hard for most of us writers to try to avoid this) that's okay as it shows a flaw that you can improve on later on in the future. Moreover I like the fact how each chapter isn't too long as it is also not too short,and the cover is really nice I like the font a lot too. I'm [most likely] rambling too much but to sum it up,I would rate your book at least a 4 star rating and/or higher and like I said there's still room for improvements (not like I can talk I'm a bad Author lololol) which is a good thing. 
          
          ✿Asahi-Kun
          
          (Just now looking at what I wrote I didn't know I wrote a lot :0)

animuamvs123

Ahhh thank you so much! I’m so glad to see that your enjoying my first fanfiction. I’m hoping to make a lot of twist and turns in the story so be on the look out for that. I thought it was getting a bit to cliche so I was getting scared that no one would enjoy it ;-; but I’m glad to see that you enjoy me work.
            
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