anna2reed

Kks tysm 
            I’m abit clueless tbh so thanks sm for the help 

That's all I got. I didn't actually intend to write this much smh, I hope you don't mind. I love you story so far, and I'll continue to read it whether or not you add any changes!

And then what about the guy Harper was caught with? What did she actually do with him? Does she have feelings for that guy or is he just a friend? (My one storyline rec is that you incorporate him later on in the story again as a second love interest, or someone that gets Noah jealous  I love the jealous and possessive scenes in smut )  
            
            But for now, if it were up to me, I would explore more backstory like I mentioned above. Then, I would showcase each of their internal struggle with the fact that they want someone they're not supposed to in a bit more detail. 
            
            Let it play out across some more scenes before they actually do the deed  and then go for it full steam ahead.