@cjnewman Thank you, I'm really liking the story. I would like to clarify that I don't tend to waste my time commenting on stories unless I like them, but I feel like sometimes my comments give the complete opposite vibe.
I write the comments when I see that some things could be better because there are no perfect stories. However, I don't expect the writers to do what I say, the comments are there for good or for bad but they can be ignored.