annexisanne

@Zainylove hey i can not post this on my wall jehehe i dont know what to call it.. anyways i have read your story. It was unique i 8never read anything with the same plot as your story. I guess for me you could minimize the lenght of a paragraph. It really is not necessary that you put or write everything on what she did in the morning. Just don't over write i guess. In my opinion long paragraphs tend to become boring. Well its my opinion only and base from my experience i hope that you would find these helpful and not insulting. Its my first time to have a friend in a social site and i dont want to lose one.

zainysuperstick

its my first time writing so there are too many spelling mistakes and some sort of errors  @annexisanne
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zainysuperstick

thank u and I totally will try to follow ur advice @annexisanne
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annexisanne

@didakam thanks god hahahah you did not reply si i am little bit cincern why. And thought maybe you mad at me hahahah but i guess not. Thank you for being my friend,....
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annexisanne

@Zainylove hey i can not post this on my wall jehehe i dont know what to call it.. anyways i have read your story. It was unique i 8never read anything with the same plot as your story. I guess for me you could minimize the lenght of a paragraph. It really is not necessary that you put or write everything on what she did in the morning. Just don't over write i guess. In my opinion long paragraphs tend to become boring. Well its my opinion only and base from my experience i hope that you would find these helpful and not insulting. Its my first time to have a friend in a social site and i dont want to lose one.

zainysuperstick

its my first time writing so there are too many spelling mistakes and some sort of errors  @annexisanne
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zainysuperstick

thank u and I totally will try to follow ur advice @annexisanne
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annexisanne

@didakam thanks god hahahah you did not reply si i am little bit cincern why. And thought maybe you mad at me hahahah but i guess not. Thank you for being my friend,....
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annexisanne

@Zainylove hey i can not post this on my wall jehehe i dont know what to call it.. anywayas i have read your story. It was unique i never read anything with the same plot as your story. I guess for me you could minimize the lenght of a paragraph. It really is not necessary that you out or write everything on what she did in the morning. Just don't over write i guess. In my opinion long paragraphs tnd to become boring

annexisanne

@Zainylove so your writing abilities run in the blood then. Me and my sister are more of a reader than a writer....

didakam

@annexisanne I dont know about that but thanks Ill take it as a complement
            I read stories too
            I can read a story over 50 long chapters for one day and add another if I enjoy it.
            I used to have like tons of books in my wattpad library but since the memory couldnt take them all I deleted some.
            I uploaded some chapters. but I dont know if Ill manage when I start school in 3 days
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annexisanne

@Zainylove wow your young... i was just curious you know. i started wattpad at the age of 13 and i still dont have my own story. But you already have... so thats why..

didakam

@annexisanne oh
            I dont know maybe because wattpad is my get away from my boring life.
            Truly its borin but interesting cause I have fun on my own.
            My life is like a roller coaster ride mixed with a ferris wheel
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