Jackie

@KadarTv okay I sent it. You asked, so I did the read for read. I am by no means amazing, so don’t judge what I had to say or take it to heart please! Your story is great right now too, I was just giving suggestions the way I’d want someone to give me. 

@KadarTv okok so I went over it, and I do have a few comments ( not bad, it’s an AMAZING story). Do you have an email or something I can send them to? I don’t want to just comment on your work like that. Also, can you check over mine?

@anomaly123vital ohh, that’s when you’re going to read my book and I’ll read yours and then we’ll give each other feedback in the comments