anon_jayy

So I’ve unpublished the book, the story is all over the place. I’m going to rewrite the entire story because I just feel like that would be better for me  instead of changing stuff throughout the book. Same characters maybe a different plot and all that the abuse and all that stuff is staying it might just be in a different way this time so please stay tuned

anon_jayy

So I’ve unpublished the book, the story is all over the place. I’m going to rewrite the entire story because I just feel like that would be better for me  instead of changing stuff throughout the book. Same characters maybe a different plot and all that the abuse and all that stuff is staying it might just be in a different way this time so please stay tuned

anon_jayy

Ok so it seems a few people didn’t like the ending… so tell me where you think it went wrong. I wrote the ending the way I did so it could kind of play into the second book, but I will gladly change it because I do want to satisfy all my readers. No need to be rude in the comments though, this is the first book I’ve ever wrote, so I’m very open to criticism and help. Simply saying “Hey I feel like you could do better with your ending, these parts here and here are confusing” would be a lot better for me.

ConnieMinx

I had no problems with the ending. You kinda set it up when it was mentioned that Jamal and King were best friends.  I hope in the 2nd book you give some background to their relationship. 
            
            Oh I’m fine with mpreg. It’s your story and vision. If they don’t like it then they don’t have to read it or you can block them.
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