Hello! My name is @anoncommentercritism, I give out very harsh, critical, important flaws in your writing. ヅ
Whatever you want to be reviewed (criticised, cons & ups, un-cons.) ♫

Please keep AWARE that I can be harsh, so I suggest you will be matured about critical reviews if your at least fifteen or older - if you lie about your age, your writing skills will determine and personality will, your reaction to review(s).

I am a socially active writer, with content in making stories WHILE noticing my OWN flaws. I'm not perfect! Neither are you!

I am a working fifteen year old, your average, normal one in fact! 

Remember, sorry if I hurt your feelings, I do not hate you as a person, if I 'hate' your writing, PLEASE, keep in mind that you do not DELETE your fantastic writing, keep it up for other people that enjoy your work!

It'll be pretty sad to see a actual 15+ year old - so sad; that I gave out a harsh review to them. I do love you, but when it comes to writing? I go mad, I point out every flaw!

My harsh reviews:
@islanddmica
Your writing is fantastically good! But, ugh, the metaphors! It disgusts me, please change it I feel like actually puking all over my laptop screen (15'' inch macbook pro'', your probably writing on a phone.
No paragraphs it seems? But, pass that. Learn how to do paragraphs.
+++ MORE!

- sadly they deleted their account because of the rv!