anonymous

I’ve written a story and am curious on how to get it seen. I’d love any feedback or input. This is just the first few parts https://www.wattpad.com/story/377569917?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Phantom1_1

Hello
          
          After a 6 year hiatus of writing, I am back on Wattpad with a new fantasy adventure novel titled "Teleka: Dawn of a New Age" and would love to hear your thoughts on it.
          
          Here's the synopsis: In a post-medieval era where a small population wields telekinetic-like powers known as "the wisp", a young woman from a distant village who possesses these powers reunites with her brother for a quest to rescue their father after learning that he is still alive. What begins as a straightforward search however, inevitably spirals out of control when it is suspected that their father's sudden disappearance may be anything but a coincidence.
          
          Please check it out if you genuinely find it interesting and let me know what you think.
          
          Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/296829822-teleka-dawn-of-a-new-age