Hi! I am a new writer and I just checked out your book! It was really good! Would love it if you'd check out my book and give me your comments! It would really be helpful for me to improve my writing...
I wrote a "short story" for English class, and I think I'm going to publish it here just because. So every few days I will add a new paragraph as a new part (there's 9). So, I'm going to start doing that tomorrow :)