Your book, 'Self Harm' is a very intriguing idea in which it almost tells small stories of pain and grief, yet always ends with a positive notion. It was very enjoyable, however, despite the wonderful word work, it feels as if some weren't exactly laced together as I hoped it would. I recommend finding ways to really submerge the readers with the desired emotion. Other than that, it was fantastic! Always remeber, there is never enough improvement.