honeyj0y

Hey all my WONDERFUL fans!!! <3
          Tis' me my lovelys!!!
          I am here to ask you guys for some help. I have an idea for a new story. It is a romance/adventure and I am hoping it will be partly successful..maybe... anyways TO THE BLURB!!!
          
          When Ariette is summoned to the palace by King Desmond and his wife Lady Cecilia, they surprise her by asking her to marry their son Gian. She is forced to accept but has dreams of becoming an adventurer. Gian becomes more a friend than a fiancé and takes Ariette to the weapons room where warriors and guards are to choose the weapon that best suits them. Although it is forbidden for a female to become a warrior or assassin, she disobeys rules and chooses a weapon for herself. Little does she know she was followed by Bernadette; A jealous worker in the palace. Bernadette quickly grabs the bow and arrow closest to her and threatens to shoot. Ariette was much to smart for Bernadette and quickly searches to find a weapon she can handle properly. As she enters a restricted room she finds a sword. This was a normal sword, to others maybe, but to Ariette it was special. As Bernadette follows Ariette into the room, she finds that the sword has given Ariette powers. As Ariette’s hair turns from bright red to black she is unstoppable. Her hair shortens, her shoulders broaden and her eyes turn to grey as she starts to transform. But into what...
          
          so tell me what you think and tell me if i should continue with this...
          
          
          xxxGeneralMuffinxxx

sdlove00

OMG! Thanxs so much for fanning me. i know, u should slap me for bein months late on the thank you. But hey! I was wondering if you could check out my story "If You Really Knew Me," and possibly vote or comment? I would really like to see what people think on what they enjoy about it and/ or what I need to improve on.
          
          Thanxs so much!
          
          Summer Love <3