Sholuuuu

Hyyy I read your story,The story line is going nicely but due to your grammatical mistakes I didn't read further because I'm not able to understand what you wanna say I don't wanna be rude but as I'm also a writer that's why I thought to say all this I hope you will understand please work a little on your english and other all thing is nicely I love how you represent your story just write without grammatical mistakes.. . Hope your day goes well byee