hey author i loved your writing skills u r one of my favourite author cuz your ideas and writings are awesome but one thing i want to share , i don't like this idea of forgiveness at all . like in FIGHT FOR LOVE ( Imp one )her relationship was like toxic , he was hurting her every second , clubbing , attending parties with different models nd top of all brought his ex home to live with them , gave all rights of naira to her , never went to shopping with her but went with ex , coming home late with his ex aur apni biwi paas aana kb ? khali jb physical hona otherwise noo , apne friedns k saath time h for wife no
she went through this much pain , despite of all got nothing nd phir jb baat aayi khudke k liye kuch krne ki dur jane ki toh do din m usko dusra chance dediya , why ?? why r we supporting this toxicity in books in characters , male lead se itna obsession h ki female lead ki koi value hi nhi h doormat ki tarah jhelo aur maaf kro wali cheez kyu h ?? usko strong kyu nhi dikha skte kyu nhi usko self respect k liye stand lena usko choose krna diha skte zaruri h usko vulnerable banana
here naira why can't we show her with someone better who truly deserves her who will keep her happy usko btana nhi pdega woh naturally hoga , kyu nhi dikha skte h aisa ?? aur kartik uske saath itna hi obsession h toh let him go through same pain atleast ek bar woh bhi ussi dard se guzre utne hi time k liye ya usse jyada hi cuz he deserves , usko bhi whi sbb feel ho itni achai kyu h uske saath ??
same thing happened in cheating track too if he loved her that much then why was he whoring around lusting over other woman ?? why ? but now u won't change it cuz its completed soo atleast fight for love usko jb abhi aana aap change kr dena
plss if u ever come back here to complete your work , plsss pls change this story track cuz bhut jyada toxicity dekh li abb kuch pure pdhna h plss change this , change this obsession to ML , let them too enjoy same pain plss do that author
thank u
