@Stardust_003 I like the description, it's just the right length. There are a few grammatical errors but nothing that I don't have as well lol. Before I post a chapter I read over it three times to make sure I wanna use certain words and to see if I spelled anything wrong. But overall I'm really digging your work. Keep writing!!
@Stardust_003 lol I hardly think I'm qualified for that but I can try my best! I'll read what you have posted and give you some "criticism" I'm sure it's great though! Any certain questions you want me to answer?